Practice Match: Alberto el Patron vs. Matt Sydal

[Tony]

So, there it is. This is a kind of a preview to the style of my fed. It will be an over-the-top indy fed, aiming to be the PWG of pic feds. Sorry about no tope suicidas though, I need to get a larger table for that. And the lightning issues caused the blurry pictures so...

This is the first proper match I've done with proper wrestling figures, so nice or rough, give all tips you can and all your thoughts. I want to know what I need to improve on before starting my fed.

[King Of Spice]

Damn, dude, that was pretty great.

Your posing is really good for the most part. Some frames looked odd but for the better part of this match they were solid. Just focus on the arms, hands, and feet being in the right position. The actual match itself was paced nicely. Good back and forth, nice sequences. The Cross-Arm Breaker countered into the pump-handle slam was great. The finish was nice. Pretty sweet job dude.

[Jack]

Thought that was pretty good dude. The match had a good pacing, which isnt easy to find early on in your pic fedding career. Had some really nice false finishes especially the Arm Bar sequences. Main problem is some of your moves look a bit unrealistic, especially the high risk ones. Just have a think about how high they jump when they are doing the moves and that should help. Also make sure that you have no stiff joints especially in the legs, bend them just like the person doing the move would do. Lighting was actually fine, I wasn't too bothered. Also I personally dont like the numbers on screen when there is a pin, takes you away from what is going on in the ring.

[Tony]

Dec 26, 2014 12:10:20 GMT -5 Jack said:

Thought that was pretty good dude. The match had a good pacing, which isnt easy to find early on in your pic fedding career. Had some really nice false finishes especially the Arm Bar sequences. Main problem is some of your moves look a bit unrealistic, especially the high risk ones. Just have a think about how high they jump when they are doing the moves and that should help. Also make sure that you have no stiff joints especially in the legs, bend them just like the person doing the move would do. Lighting was actually fine, I wasn't too bothered. Also I personally dont like the numbers on screen when there is a pin, takes you away from what is going on in the ring.

Thanks a lot man, notes taken. As for the numbers, they are there because I don't have a referee - yet, that is.

[PRIME Wrestling]

This is really fucking good. I'm not a fan of the numbers on the screen, either, but posing, pacing, and picture quality were all really great. For one of your first matches, this is awesome. Really can't wait to see a full show from you.