WAIF
The Man of 1004 Names
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Post by WAIF on Jan 1, 2015 5:38:31 GMT -5
3 weeks after Mania here we go. This came a but early due to me know ing I won't have time later on to upload.
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Jan 1, 2015 5:54:33 GMT -5
I skimmed through this and for the most part it was okay. But there are still a lot of things you need to work on. I think I've told you about a thousand times to work on posing and pacing now, so I won't bother with that. But you still need to work on unrealistic moves and weird stuff. Your poses with your Brodie figure are really really stiff. Maybe you can't move the torso as well but at least move his legs. Richard proved that figure is easy as fuck to pose with. Also stop with the giving people random accessories. Why did John Cena have an R-Truth shirt and Dean Ambrose have a Sheamus shirt? Why not just give John Cena a John Cena shirt and Dean Ambrose a hoodie or something? Just work on the weird shit and you'll improve. Posing was improved for this show and I like how you use Evan in your fed.
6.5/10$$
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Post by Tony on Jan 1, 2015 6:02:47 GMT -5
Imo you take way too many pictures of a simple move. An irish whip doesn't have to be 5-6 pictures. Check how Harrison does that stuff - 2 or 3 pictures is very well if done correctly, like he does.
As far as other stuff goes, I won't point out what Bobby said already about all that weird shit you have going there but as a whole, this was more enjoyable to me than any of your former shows. You are definetly getting better but there's still so much to do. Especially for pacing of the matches. Posing is a lot better already.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 2, 2015 23:59:55 GMT -5
Thank you guys for the reviews.
Anyone else?
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gabe
I am shrimp
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Post by gabe on Jan 12, 2015 20:05:31 GMT -5
time to review this show after a while.
Noticed that you added the detail to Punk looking behind him to make sure Wyatt wasn't there. Also like that you added a filler match in the feud of Punk/Wyatt. The RKO reversal was nice and the match was pretty good. Noticed a lot of improvements. Nice touch by having thee rocking chair on the ramp. The match ended pretty suddenly and it ended too quick IMO. Liked Wyatt coming out, but I wasn't a fan of Wyatt calling him by his real name. It's not just you it's just that I never really liked promos where wrestlers would call each other by their real name. Just a pet peeve of mine lol. Also I wasn't a fan of Cesaro's promo. I can't really picture him calling out Brock like that and calling him a bitch. Nice brawling between them and Rock coming out was nice.maybe he gets thrown into the mix? I just don't think you should have had Cesaro end it with a backbreaker. Bryan vs. Zayn was nice. Nice technical wrestling in the begining. I see the pacing has improved in this match. As well as the posing. I really disliked that righr after Bryan hit the knee he didn't go for a pin and then Heyman came out. And that then after Zayn barely sold it and got right back up. Your Heyman/Bryan rivalry is fine, but stop making Harper use Corbin's finisher. It's just weird. The Breeze n Big E. thing was cool. Maybe setting up for a future ladder match? Rollins and Ziggler got off to a good start. Another match opening with technical wrestling, their match at Mania was good so this match should be good too. This match was very very good! I'm actually very impressed by this! The transitions were nice, the pacing was good, and the posing improved by far. This is honestly, next to that match you sent to me, my favorite match of yours. The feud between these two has been very good and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Although i thought it was too soon for Rollins to lose the title, i like seeing the WHC back on Dolph. Bourne vs. Harper, this should be good. Showcasing that brawler technique of Harper. Dominating Bourne in the begining. Bourne getting back in it was good. Love the way you posed that spaceman moonsault to the outside. That electric chair reversal was good. Airbourne reversal was brutal. I don't really like that Bourne kicked out of the discus lariat, mainly because of the strength of Harper and how he dominated him in the early moments of the match. Crazy lariat to the ref. And Bryan is back to get Harper, uh oh. Jesus Christ! That chairshot to Harper my god! And Bourne wins. Good match. Can't wait to see where you go from here. And now Cena vs. Ambrose. Don't really like the shirts they're wearing because you could've turned them inside out. Gets hardcore pretty quick in the begining but i dont mind. Cena's got thumbtacks but Ambrose stops it. And the ring is full of chairs. My god! The way Cena landed on those tacks! Is he dead? Ambrose might kill him. And Ambrose lands in thumbtacks! Fuck! This match is insane. So many lighttubes and they're just killing each other. Didn't really like that Cena threw Ambrose so far to the ramo, but fuck. That was sick. And an AA from the top rope onto the lighttubes and chairs! And Cena wins. My god. That match was fuckin insane.
Overall, there was good and bad. A lot of good though. But this show was an improvement for you, just work on what i think you should work on. Very impressive show.
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We are one, we are one
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Post by Dylan. on Jan 25, 2015 10:37:57 GMT -5
You take one step forward and two steps back seemingly every single show. You need to focus on posing, story, and not taking too many pictures for a simple move. Nothing in this show really made me say wow. I would have to congratulate you on not making me want to inject antifreeze during the show like the last one. You improve in tiny increments and need to take my criticism. I plan on reviewing alot more shows this year to try and help with that. Trust me you're not the only one D-Von. But on a side not your Zayn vs Harper match from the new kids on the block show was really well done. So keep doing matches like that and work on story and you'll be B okay and maybe even B+ okay. You've got a way to go and I hope that not only I but others on the site review more and try to help guys like you and others to preform and high levels.
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