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Post by Tony on Jan 6, 2015 11:17:57 GMT -5
The pace is bad, especially in the beginning. There's a lot of poses and stuff that I am so unhappy with and I felt like this was way worse than the one I did earlier in every way, but well, only my second match and these are practice matches for a reason. All feedback and every tip you have are more than welcome.
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Post by PFI Jobba! on Jan 7, 2015 13:19:23 GMT -5
I liked it not bad good work and I did like the way u did the german suplex
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Jan 8, 2015 7:47:00 GMT -5
I really love the fact that you critiqued your own match in your post. There's so many new guys that can't take any criticism and that's one of the biggest flaws in a lot of people because it makes improving for them really difficult. I do think that the pacing was odd at the beginning, but it's Bryan and Brock! I totally understand that match starting off right away with some big moves. The posing is honestly really great considering it's your second match you've ever done. I liked the Brock Lock reversal from the running knee, even if it was a little unrealistic I really liked the match and I hope when you have enough figures, you can put out a whole show and begin storyline development and character progression.
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Post by Tony on Jan 8, 2015 8:09:17 GMT -5
I really love the fact that you critiqued your own match in your post. There's so many new guys that can't take any criticism and that's one of the biggest flaws in a lot of people because it makes improving for them really difficult. I do think that the pacing was odd at the beginning, but it's Bryan and Brock! I totally understand that match starting off right away with some big moves. The posing is honestly really great considering it's your second match you've ever done. I liked the Brock Lock reversal from the running knee, even if it was a little unrealistic I really liked the match and I hope when you have enough figures, you can put out a whole show and begin storyline development and character progression. Thanks man, I really appreciate it. It's more than necessary to recognise your own mistakes and I always try to do that. No damn way to ever get better otherwise. The Brock Lock reversal was something I saw as too unrealistic at first, but given the pace and spotfest it already was I thought to do it anyway. My style kind of is a spotfest, big sequence after big sequence. Yeah I can't wait to get into filming my show. It will take a while still but I'm getting there sooner or later. Until then, I'll keep doing these practice matches with no storyline involvement.
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