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Post by Zee Steiner on Jan 17, 2015 12:11:03 GMT -5
Worked my ass off on this.
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Post by Dylan. on Jan 18, 2015 10:32:57 GMT -5
Starting off I'm interested in The Wyatts vs Orton dynamic. Glad to see something new and fresh. Nice brawl type match-up.
Usos and Bourne vs The Shield was very fast paced and pretty well done. I'm assuming it was a No DQ type stipulation?
Devitt vs Generico was cool, I don't like how many false finishes people have now a days. If you didn't want to have Generico win, then don't have him use the brainbuster. It makes him look weak. Other than that make Devitt's footstomp look a bit more realistic. He usual doesn't follow them to the ground.
Brock vs Punk- like the other ones. starts off quick. I have never really kept up to date with your work so I'm not sure if these were feuds or not but everything started off way too hot for me. It's okay to have a lock up once in awhile my dude.
Pretty entertaining Rumble match, alot of interesting dynamics and for the most part it kept me entertained. Glad Devitt didn't win.
Considering I am unaware of your current product before this point I enjoyed this show. Huge step up from what work I've seen you put out earlier in your time here. Kudos to you and I believe I'll be looking forward to your next show, my dude!
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Post by Zee Steiner on Jan 18, 2015 13:44:34 GMT -5
Starting off I'm interested in The Wyatts vs Orton dynamic. Glad to see something new and fresh. Nice brawl type match-up. Usos and Bourne vs The Shield was very fast paced and pretty well done. I'm assuming it was a No DQ type stipulation? Devitt vs Generico was cool, I don't like how many false finishes people have now a days. If you didn't want to have Generico win, then don't have him use the brainbuster. It makes him look weak. Other than that make Devitt's footstomp look a bit more realistic. He usual doesn't follow them to the ground. Brock vs Punk- like the other ones. starts off quick. I have never really kept up to date with your work so I'm not sure if these were feuds or not but everything started off way too hot for me. It's okay to have a lock up once in awhile my dude. Pretty entertaining Rumble match, alot of interesting dynamics and for the most part it kept me entertained. Glad Devitt didn't win. Considering I am unaware of your current product before this point I enjoyed this show. Huge step up from what work I've seen you put out earlier in your time here. Kudos to you and I believe I'll be looking forward to your next show, my dude! Thanks so much man. And yeah shield vs uso & evan was six man warfare match. Thanks again man, I'll work on what you said. |
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Post by Jesus on Jan 18, 2015 14:43:30 GMT -5
Orton and bray wyatt was an enjoyable opener, the rko posing could be improved because I feel like its stiff. The match paced very well and I like this FUED better than the rvd vs wyatt fued because I feel like that didn't go any where but this fued with Orton is. Overall, the match paced good.
The 6 man tag match was cool and you improved with using roman. Before, you just had him spearing everyone and now you're identifying ways to use him. The pacing was cool and I loved the Swanton spot by seth. It's funny because I was hoping he would do it and he did. One thing, work on the head lock driver pose because the way it looked, made Ambrose arm broken.
I agree with dylan on everything he said with devitt vs generico and I want to add that some what of the time it was getting repetitive with devitt and the foot stomps. I just want you to be aware of that and time his moves correctly while adding new things to the table.
Brock vs punk was cool. Posing and pacing seened fine here. You should add people to that announce table that punk landed on. Btw, that spot was really dope and unique because other people would just have him jump the top rope, which is cool but this was something different when you had him run the apron.
Oh, and before I forget, im glad you found something for batista and triple h. Really looking foward to seeing evolution vs the wyats.
Now, for the rumble match, pacing was on point and transistions of Movement from multiple superstars in the ring was good. However, there few to many repetitive things here. The reverse hurricanrana was over used on the rumble. I know the rumble can ware you down and have you running out of ideas but doing the same moves constantly gets irritating after a while. I felt like last 11 people that you had in the ring, your main focused was just to get them and our or you were undecided on who to eliminate because barret and cena had hit multiple bull hammers and AA's with each other. Also, it was cool feeling since generico came out weak in his singles match, we came out strong in the rumble which was a good and bad thing because you didn't necessarily mean to make him look weak in singles and in the rumble strong but it benefited his character. It showed that he can hang with the big dogs and that's how his character's Been portrayed as.
Good work just use these suggestions as an advantage to your next rumble and show. You're improving a lot and I can see 2015 could possibly be a good year in your fed, just be consistent and focused!
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Post by Zee Steiner on Jan 18, 2015 15:05:03 GMT -5
Thanks guys, am going to take all this on bored!
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Post by WAIF on Jan 20, 2015 14:02:43 GMT -5
Okay let's go. I got some expectations going into this one based on the show before this. First of all I really like this Wyatt and Orton feud so far. Posing is pretty good I'm this match and the pacing was also. This match had a nice brawling style to item the hangman's DDT on the outside was nice along with the scoop slam into the corner. Good match here and I kinda marked out at Evolution. The 6 man tag was very entertaining. Nicely done. You used these guys well. That splash ontobtge ladder was cool and I went donkey balls over that sent on by Seth. Nice job. Generico vs Devitt was wonderful. I loved this match. Might be MOTN IMO. That middle drop kick turned into a buckle bomb was 2shcweet. Just a really good match that I hope has a second. Punk vs Brock was as, expected, fast paced and adrenaline pumping. Poses were nice in this as well. A lot of the spots were inspired by their Summerslam match in 2013 and I like that. Punk winning that way kinda sucked but this is another match that deserves a second. The rumble match was long as all shit lol but they kind of need to be. Bryan winning kind of surprised me. I honestly thought that you were gonna make Devitt win but thank god you didn't. Happy you gave Dry the win. Overall this was a really good show and I'm looking forward to WHD.
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