King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
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Post by King Of Spice on Feb 28, 2015 19:08:07 GMT -5
review it or die
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FWL
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Post by FWL on Mar 1, 2015 19:51:23 GMT -5
Okay, Ziggy. So, right off the bat, I can see your posing has REALLY improved from the last time I watched a show of yours. Some work can still be done to improve, but it's definitely gotten better. Some things that bugged me: Ziggler doing a stalling suplex on Bray is a bit unrealistic. In the main event, Taker laid on Triple H for TEN SECONDS while the ref was down. Why? Really, all that spot takes is a three count at most. The brawl at the end was cool, but a little tough to follow for the few seconds it lasted. Nothing really major to complain about posing wise other than that, just keep working at it. You'll only keep improving.
Here's my biggest complaint: your ring. Those first few matches without ropes could've been SO much better if you had done them with ropes. Wrestling on a big white square just doesn't work, and I'm sure you know that. Your movesets are completely cut in half. What about Eddie's frogsplash? Daniel Bryan's flying headbutt? None of those signature moves can be done in there, and it just really takes away from the match itself. Your last matches with the ropes were better, but those first couple just didn't do it for me. What's the point of having guys like Sin Cara and Bourne in matches if they can't do the moves they're known for? I don't know what your situation is obviously, but if you want to take fedding seriously, you need to invest in a ring or create a better one. Even if it's a basic ring, it's better than what you have now.
I think it was an okay show overall. I like the way you use Wyatt, his match with Ziggler was my favorite of the show. Definitely work on improving your ring if possible, the rest will come with time. Like I said earlier, I'm definitely seeing major improvement. Good stuff man, keep it up.
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
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Post by King Of Spice on Mar 4, 2015 17:15:20 GMT -5
Sup
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Post by Deleted on Mar 4, 2015 17:21:30 GMT -5
I liked this show a lot, but in the opening match, it seemed like bourne had his knees bent for 40% of the match and just looked weird. And IMO, I think you can really pull it off with that white square.
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gabe
I am shrimp
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Post by gabe on Mar 4, 2015 17:27:49 GMT -5
I can see that you have improved vastly from what your posing once was Ziggly. Good job on that, there is still work to do there like bending the knees more on elites in my opinion, but you have improved in that department. The pacing could use some work too, but I also agree with FWL on how weird it was having the few matches on just the plain white box instead of the make shit ring you used. You have used Wyatt very consistently and very well again and continued to build him up as an unstoppable force. What you do with him for Mania should be good. I wasn't very interested in seeing the main event a lot but you pulled it off alright for what the match was. Overall, I still think you can improve on the areas I said above, and I may (as well as everyone else) sound like a broken record but you should still use a real ring. Even if it's the spring one if you still have it! I saw a lot of improvements here Bobby, keep it up.
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Post by UTTW on Mar 5, 2015 16:40:14 GMT -5
i liked this show a lot i liked some of the match ups you had going on
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