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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 17:07:53 GMT -5
Reviews or constructive criticism would be nice
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Mar 1, 2015 17:20:02 GMT -5
You misspelled WrestleMania in the title of the thread and the title of the video.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 17:27:37 GMT -5
You misspelled WrestleMania in the title of the thread and the title of the video. Gimme a sec |
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Post by gabe on Mar 1, 2015 17:49:45 GMT -5
I think you really need to work on the pacing in your fed. It wasn't good, for example after Orton hit a German suplex he picked him right back up and put Hart on the top rope. There were way too many false finishes too, especially in the first match alone. You can't just have a false finish in every match, every once in a while is fine but not every match. There were also way too many taunts in every match, Harper doing his clothesline taunt too much in his match with Punk is an example, also why did you have a MITB qualifying match on the same night as MITB ladder match? That didn't make a lot of sense. The song choices also didn't go right with the matches either, you used One Republic for your main event. There was a lot of unrealistic spots as well. Punk did a Welcome To Chicago off the ladder, there were 2 three men German suplex spots in the main event, and there were more too but off the top of my head I can't remember. This wasn't a very good show, but your posing was decent through out. You need to work on the pacing, false finishes, the spots, and everything else I said.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 18:16:37 GMT -5
I think you really need to work on the pacing in your fed. It wasn't good, for example after Orton hit a German suplex he picked him right back up and put Hart on the top rope. There were way too many false finishes too, especially in the first match alone. You can't just have a false finish in every match, every once in a while is fine but not every match. There were also way too many taunts in every match, Harper doing his clothesline taunt too much in his match with Punk is an example, also why did you have a MITB qualifying match on the same night as MITB ladder match? That didn't make a lot of sense. The song choices also didn't go right with the matches either, you used One Republic for your main event. There was a lot of unrealistic spots as well. Punk did a Welcome To Chicago off the ladder, there were 2 three men German suplex spots in the main event, and there were more too but off the top of my head I can't remember. This wasn't a very good show, but your posing was decent through out. You need to work on the pacing, false finishes, the spots, and everything else I said. Thanks for your review, much appreciated. Edit: I wanted to make the ladder match extreme, cause that's what I feel like a ladder match needs to be. And I used OneRepublic's song because I really liked that song. And the qualifying match was the authority's plan to break down punk. But either thank you for the review. |
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Post by FWL on Mar 1, 2015 20:22:27 GMT -5
Opener was okay. Some decent false finishes at first, but they started to grow old towards the end. Ending was kinda abrupt as well, didn't really get built up or anything, definitely work on that. Also not a fan of that Sami Zayn custom with hair colored orange like he's Chuckie from Rugrats.
Orton vs Hart was all over the place. Pacing was way off here. I don't feel like you've got a great grasp on Bret Hart's moveset or wrestling style either. Finish was extremely odd as well, that RKO just looked off.
Punk vs Harper was pretty good actually. Pacing was off in spots, but not terrible. Some pretty good sequences. I get that Harper has a cool taunt, but doing it that many times in a match is unnecessary. Finish was pretty good. I liked this match.
Tag match was alright. Liked the Russian leg sweep into the stomp by Cesaro over Sandow. Nothing too crazy here.
MITB was okay. Some decent spots. Again, pacing definitely needs work here. The sunset flip suplex off the ladder needed another frame or two, just didn't look right. Punk hitting the Welcome to Chicago off the ladder was just ridiculous in a bad way. Punk would likely break his knee if that ever happened.
Main event wasn't horrible. Pacing was way off again. Rollins should never hit a Phoenix Splash a little over a minute into a match, just doesn't make sense. Liked the double Dirty Deeds. Finish was incredibly underwhelming for a WrestleMania main event, the same could be said for the match as a whole though.
It was an okay show overall. Punk vs Harper was definitely my favorite match of the night. Sorry if it seems like I'm being too harsh, just trying to help you get better. Posing can definitely improve, but it was okay. Pacing definitely needs work, as does your storytelling with your matches. Keep working at it!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 21:41:22 GMT -5
Opener was okay. Some decent false finishes at first, but they started to grow old towards the end. Ending was kinda abrupt as well, didn't really get built up or anything, definitely work on that. Also not a fan of that Sami Zayn custom with hair colored orange like he's Chuckie from Rugrats. Orton vs Hart was all over the place. Pacing was way off here. I don't feel like you've got a great grasp on Bret Hart's moveset or wrestling style either. Finish was extremely odd as well, that RKO just looked off. Punk vs Harper was pretty good actually. Pacing was off in spots, but not terrible. Some pretty good sequences. I get that Harper has a cool taunt, but doing it that many times in a match is unnecessary. Finish was pretty good. I liked this match. Tag match was alright. Liked the Russian leg sweep into the stomp by Cesaro over Sandow. Nothing too crazy here. MITB was okay. Some decent spots. Again, pacing definitely needs work here. The sunset flip suplex off the ladder needed another frame or two, just didn't look right. Punk hitting the Welcome to Chicago off the ladder was just ridiculous in a bad way. Punk would likely break his knee if that ever happened. Main event wasn't horrible. Pacing was way off again. Rollins should never hit a Phoenix Splash a little over a minute into a match, just doesn't make sense. Liked the double Dirty Deeds. Finish was incredibly underwhelming for a WrestleMania main event, the same could be said for the match as a whole though. It was an okay show overall. Punk vs Harper was definitely my favorite match of the night. Sorry if it seems like I'm being too harsh, just trying to help you get better. Posing can definitely improve, but it was okay. Pacing definitely needs work, as does your storytelling with your matches. Keep working at it! Thanks man, really appreciated. I'll work on pacing and poses more. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2015 13:22:27 GMT -5
Hai
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