WAIF Ladder War

[WAIF]

[Wicked]

This show was actually really cool. Just as good as your last one. You've really been steadily improving, slowly but Shirley. Good work Von. I still like the name of the company by the way, creative. An all ladder match ppv seems a bit too gimmicky but it worked out well in the end.
-The opener was pretty sweet. I really enjoyed Jericho and Orton doing the 3D/Assisted RKO. El Zaynerico is still really funny to me... You use Sami pretty well as well. The finish was a bit weird, Seth should've just Ghetto Foot Stomped Jericho's ass.
-That Steen custom is really distracting but good for you for having one at least.. Same with the Breeze. This match was ok. You use Owens pretty good, same with Breeze.
-Cool Shield Reunion.
-I like what you are doing with Dean. Cool ending.. I didn't like that Cena took light tubes, he is the face and the golden boy of WWE..
-Cool triple threat. THE ROCK SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE ELBOW PADS!!! This match was pretty cool. I wish Cesaro won, but good for Brock..
-I really like the way you use Brodie Lee. You seem to use Big Rig pretty well. Just like the Ambrose/Cena feud this Lee/Bourne feud has been going on a bit long man.. The match was pretty cool. Everyone seemed to get there sh!t in. Makes me want to film more with Harper. Nice LARIATOOOOO'S with Luke. Cool match.

In conclusion your arena is cool, your fed is very creative (sometimes too much ) however this show was pretty sweet man. Good work keep up the good work and make sure to try to improve posing even though it's pretty good. Good work Vonni.

[WAIF]

Anyone else? Would love to hear what you guys Think

[Hobbs]

Ratings
IC Title 4 Way: ***1/4
Owens vs Sheamus vs Breeze: **3/4
Ambrose vs Cena: **1/2
Rock vs Cesaro vs Lesnar: ***1/2
Harper vs Bourne: ***1/4
Show: 6/10

Review: I'll keep this short as I won't have much to say.
Some of the matches were good, others were meh and some just didn't appeal to me at all. Ambrose vs Cena just felt too bland and too boring as nothing exciting happened and it felt like overkill to me with the excess of light tubes. Owens vs Breeze vs Sheamus was alright but it didn't make much sense to me of what was going on but winner will suffice. My MOTN was the Main Event as I felt like while the 3 way between Rock, Cesaro, and Lesnar was good, this match just had a little bit more there and while the rating may not show it I was into this match down the final stretch and I liked the outcome and I'm looking forward to what's in store next. Although I do suggest adding in a bit of realism and not to overdo some things. But overall good show.

[gabe]

I can't review this match by match at the moment, but I think you really need to work on realism and taking your time with filming shows. By taking your time, I mean you need to pace how you film. For example, think about what move you're gonna do next. You can't just give a wrestler a move they wouldn't do in real life. Like, you have to think to yourself, would Orton and Rollins actually give Jericho a double team piledriver through the announce table? Speaking of which, I couldn't even tell what you were doing with that because all I saw was Rollins on the floor after Jericho went through the table, if it was set up better I could've seen what you were setting up for. There were other moves that peeved me when wrestlers did them, but the biggest thing that shouldn't have happened on the show was Harper giving Bourne that Trevor Lee cross body. I still wonder why you did that, it just shouldn't have happened at all. I'm not trying to shit on this show, but this pales in comparison to one of the shows you did a while ago. You can improve your fed by taking this advice and putting it forth in your fed. I know you can do way better than this, you just need to know what to do and what not to do. Other than that, I think you should fuehrer the Sheamus vs. Steen feud because there's a lot you can do with that. The triple there at ladder match was the best match of the show to me and you use Breeze nicely. I also think you should stop putting Cena in so many hardcore matches. He doesn't need them to further what's happening with Ambrose. There wasn't a lot I can say about this show other than what I already wrote earlier. Just take your time with what you're doing, and know what moves some guys would and would not do. Hopefully the next show is a step up for you dude.

[King Of Spice]

It feels to me like every time you take 1 step forward, you take 2 steps back.

Show was good for a decent part of it. But there was a lot of weird stuff that soured it.

I have NO earthly idea why the fuck you would make Luke Harper do a running-moonsault-slam. That's up there for the title of weirdest thing you've ever done in your fed.

The good however was there. I enjoyed the card and thought it was creative. You've come much further in terms of posing, but you do some things that take away from the improvements, if you know what I'm saying.

Yes, Luke Harper is very fast for a big man, but he would never do anything like the Lee move.

Stick to movesets, iron out the dumb stuff, and you'll go that extra step higher.